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mattchewone
3rd October 2009, 19:13
Hi guys/gals,

I put this up for my Sensei (Karate Instructor) this week and would love for a bit of feedback from people. It wasnt hand created, i used a program to do it, i am not claiming to be a web design master, but for now it is something.

I am limited with what i can do with the layout, but i am learning.

Link - www.wadokai-bushinome.co.uk

Thanks
Matt

Ashleyp
3rd October 2009, 20:46
link matt? lol

Alex
3rd October 2009, 22:04
lol, fail.

If you need any help let me know.

mattchewone
4th October 2009, 09:48
Flip sake i cant believe that.

Will edit first post!

sshaxx
4th October 2009, 14:45
somethings up with the logo in the top left but otherwise the site looks pretty good, clean and simple

mattchewone
4th October 2009, 17:49
What do you mean up with logo? Could you please explain.

Thank you for your comments.

Ryan
4th October 2009, 17:56
shooting a pic of a black man in a white suit = lol.

I had the joy at a fashion launch last night.

mattchewone
5th October 2009, 09:08
Cheers Ryan lol

It was only a very rough crappy pic to get it on the site. I will be taken another one soon, with my newly acquired 40D. Any tips for shooting White on Black?

PSPDan
5th October 2009, 09:32
Actually it's much better than what most peole do when they make their first few websites. Bright colours eveywhere, wordart, times new roman links etc.

Looks clean and simple. I like :y:

mattchewone
5th October 2009, 10:37
Thank you!

The idea was to keep it clean simple and easy to use/navigate. If there is one thing i hate its cluttered and un-user friendly sites!

Ryan
5th October 2009, 10:47
Cheers Ryan lol

It was only a very rough crappy pic to get it on the site. I will be taken another one soon, with my newly acquired 40D. Any tips for shooting White on Black?

yep, get him to wear something else :D

Alex
5th October 2009, 11:58
tut tut, fails on validation, you didn't encode your ampersands.

& = &

flynnsvtr
5th October 2009, 13:54
If its your first attempt its not too bad.

Personally I think the headers a bit tacky and you should make the width a bit smaller, since there doesnt seem to be massive amounts of information on it you dont need the website to fill the screen.

Here is a website i made for an estate agent, bearing in mind it was made a while ago when my website skills were a it noobish, hence marquee text scrolling 90mph lol.

http://www.humphreysofchester.co.uk/#

mattchewone
5th October 2009, 14:19
tut tut, fails on validation, you didn't encode your ampersands.

& = &

All done through a program so it wasnt me lol I'm still learning and he wanted something up so i used a program to do it all :(

If its your first attempt its not too bad.

Personally I think the headers a bit tacky and you should make the width a bit smaller, since there doesnt seem to be massive amounts of information on it you dont need the website to fill the screen.

Here is a website i made for an estate agent, bearing in mind it was made a while ago when my website skills were a it noobish, hence marquee text scrolling 90mph lol.

http://www.humphreysofchester.co.uk/#


Thats a nice site, what did you use to create it or was it all done by scratch? I like the blocks and the menu system.

What do you think i could do to improve the header? I am limited to text only unless i create my own CSS for the header.

Thanks

Alex
5th October 2009, 18:00
You should get NetBeans if your going to do some PHP.
http://www.netbeans.org/downloads/index.html

Has a good syntax checker.

Need to get you started on jQuery too with some ajax shizzle.