I've made a drum and bass song

[Stissy]

i worked on it originally with a few friend
but then it was passed back and forth between me and a guy from essex

tell me what you think

http://www.4shared.com/audio/QBouTF5...lics__VIP.html

[FairDoos]

Not really my cup of tea but good melody though

[Stissy]

Originally Posted by FairDoos

Not really my cup of tea but good melody though

cheers man - at least you're checking it out

[Easty]

Melody is sweet mate, could do with more production on the beats though, what software are you using ?

It kind of sounds a bit flat on the kicks and a bit samey... with a better intro and a bit more layering you could be onto a winner

In terms of production check out this guy for some inspiration, even if his tunes aren't your cup of tea, they are -so- tight.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ju8BL...ext=1&index=19

See how much an intro can add to your track ?

[wingnuts]

i think its really good can you send me a mp3 of it please and def keep me updated with future work

[auds]

I really like it it's got me moving hehe only thing I would say is that nice deep and dark rumbling sound (don't know what you call it lol) in the background needs to be moarrrrrrrr hehehe apart from that I really like it

[DusheR]

GET SOME DISTORTION ON ITTTTTT

Oh and bang a wobble on that sub bass

[Jamb0]

Originally Posted by wingnuts

i think its really good can you send me a mp3 of it please and def keep me updated with future work

press the download button? lol

[Stissy]

Originally Posted by Easty

Melody is sweet mate, could do with more production on the beats though, what software are you using ?

It kind of sounds a bit flat on the kicks and a bit samey... with a better intro and a bit more layering you could be onto a winner

In terms of production check out this guy for some inspiration, even if his tunes aren't your cup of tea, they are -so- tight.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ju8BL...ext=1&index=19

See how much an intro can add to your track ?

i'm using reason 4.0 - standard librarys and that

yeah that songs well good
i hate intros though, most drum and bass songs are used in set and that, and intro just takes everything away from it. and if you're sitting around with some friends or something, or listening to music in your car you don't want a lot of intros. i say there should be one intro and thats the first song on the album. other than that, it should kick straight in.

i'm not too great at reason, so it probably could do with layering better, but cheers

Originally Posted by wingnuts

i think its really good can you send me a mp3 of it please and def keep me updated with future work

theres a download button on the link - its all free

Originally Posted by auds

I really like it it's got me moving hehe only thing I would say is that nice deep and dark rumbling sound (don't know what you call it lol) in the background needs to be moarrrrrrrr hehehe apart from that I really like it

thanks don't you start your music course this month?