ok here you go dude
strings need to be thicker there to weak.
compression needs sorting out.
main lead there is way to much Hi end Frequencies on it get an eq to it lower around 1,300hz - 1,500hz
add more 70hz - 100hz on the bassline add compression to the bassline aswell needs to sound fuller and thicker.
kick needs more lower end freqs aswell its not really got any subwoofer feel to it.
Add background SFX i dont really hear any tbh dude.
a track is made by SFX most top tracks even pop songs have SFX all over the place like uplifters and downlifter and atmosphere sounds.
Track is to repetative
needs an introduction to another lead in there tbh.
Percussion
add bongo's,timba's,congo's
you'll be suprised how different the percussion will sound once you add them.
not really much else i can add dude its a case of trial and error
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good luck!
Heatwave! - Adagio For Strings.mp3 (Feedback Required, Self Creation)
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