ClioSport Fastcar mag chop - Saxperience

Andyc123 · 28th August 2009, 18:53

Heres Some more of my work, the rear image isnt finished! but the front is!

Its for the 'fastcar' mag comp!.. you'll know what i mean, if you have the mag! what you think!,

Andy

C&C

Rob_Furio7 · 29th August 2009, 00:10

the pink windscreen badge needs slight adjustment. The front wheel in the second page is a bit to wide. The alloys in the first pic dont look very high quailty.

im only giving alot of constructive critism cos its a magazine comp, good luck mate

looks great so far

i wish i had ps ...

JamesR^m · 29th August 2009, 01:04

I thought that was a Fiat 500 from the front! lol

Rob_Furio7 · 29th August 2009, 13:10

Quote:

Originally Posted by SaXo_vtr123

I thought that was a Fiat 500 from the front! lol

fiat 500 has round lights

D4N91 · 29th August 2009, 13:48

thats amazing buddy

Andyc123 · 29th August 2009, 18:44

Thanks guys! .. im stil gunna work on them abit, Before i send them in!, Gunna finish my other saxo project too!

Andyc123 · 29th August 2009, 18:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by Rob_Furio7

the pink windscreen badge needs slight adjustment. The front wheel in the second page is a bit to wide. The alloys in the first pic dont look very high quailty.

im only giving alot of constructive critism cos its a magazine comp, good luck mate

looks great so far

i wish i had ps ...

Thank you mate, thats what i need!.

I shall change the 2nd one alot, The wheels on the first chop i might change the centre's found some black centres soo maybe. .

redlinerdj · 29th August 2009, 19:02

looks good mate! how long has it taken you to do that?

Andyc123 · 31st August 2009, 18:35

About 20 mins! lol, Will finished them this week!

Jozzyy · 1st September 2009, 13:06

that looks good

Danr · 1st September 2009, 13:07

Not sure on the front wheel. It slants that little bit too much on the front on picture.

Good work though.

Paul^p · 1st September 2009, 13:10

Wheels need more work mate. They don't look realistic.

Maybe try putting some brake calipers behind them?

Andyc123 · 3rd September 2009, 12:38

Im improving the front of the clio again, before i send it !

But i decided the back needed a little more!

Looks weird imo! lol

Andy

Rob_Furio7 · 3rd September 2009, 14:59

looks really cool man, i like it!
are those seat ibiza rear lights? the front wheels needs to be pulled in a bit, and the rear needs to be sticking out further. what happened to the wing mirror?

Andyc123 · 3rd September 2009, 17:10

Ah yeah the mirror! .. was just messing around! .. to see what it would be like!..Answer - Shit! So shall change,

There off a alfa actually!.. Kinda work on the clio!

Andy

Ben · 3rd September 2009, 17:28

I'm gonna steal it and send it in as my own work

Jokes aside that looks mint mate.

xxtiny_vts_angelxx · 3rd September 2009, 18:16

i have seen that LOL badge b4 on a clio
just cant find it

Jorge- · 3rd September 2009, 18:25

I don't know if you have done this yet or not...

Front tyre is wierdly wide.

Rear lights arent even, the boot crosses one but not the other in the correct place.

Mirror looks dodgey.

Rear tyre on the right has a layer over the top of it.

Front tyre on right is attached to bumper?

The covers on the headlights need a bit of texture, they just look flat where the bonnet and wing leading to it have a line down the middle with light shining.

Need some detail in the bumper grill, the black looks a bit dark

Also, try to blend in the black you have used on the tyres.. for the brush, and sort the shape of the wheels. Also tuck in the front wheel from behind as others said

I am good at criticism. It looks great, but as the other guy said, for a magazine comp you want perfection.

Oh and dewiper it

I think I am done, but that aside it looks great so far.

Edit:

Door handle still on the rear shot

Rob_Furio7 · 26th September 2009, 16:32

final chop?????????/